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Kaya Flack



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PostSubject: First Time (Danny/Becca/Mac )   Fri Aug 24, 2012 6:22 pm

Title : First Time
Pairing : Danny Messer /Becca Pierce/ Mac Taylor
Rating : K+
A/N : Own the idea and the female character.
Feat : NY team and Becca's parents..
Summary : Danny and Becca are together but their life is set to be threatened.. But by who and why? An affair takes place...

Read to find out....

Chapter One

Danny was with his girlfriend Becca at their New York apartment spending the day together as they had been seeing each other for five years, Danny loved his girlfriend so much despite the views their friends had about them before they left for NYC.

Becca loved Danny so much and she knew that since they started seeing each other, neither knew of what concerns would later crop up for them but Danny had asked Becca to go with him to New York, and she agreed to go with him.

( Flashback )

Danny and Becca were on the harbour talking when Danny asked her " Come with me to New York?" which took Becca by surprise and she tells Danny " I will go with you to New York.", which made Danny happy that Becca was going with him to NYC.

Becca packed up all her stuff from her bedroom, then left to meet up with Danny at the location which would start them on the journey to NYC together.

( End of flashback )


Becca had an appointment with her doctor who gave her some news that she clearly was not ready for but she knew that the hardest part would be telling Danny the news and she had no idea how he would react to it.

Danny was worried about Becca and his worries mounted over the last two or so months and he hoped it wasn't anything life - threatening to Becca, he paced worriedly in their apartment, biting his nails in worry.

Becca returned home to find Danny pacing when she asked " You ok?", when Danny replied " I've been worried about you and I don't want to lose you.", as Becca replied " Trust me, Danny you are never gonna lose me.".

Danny sniffled and walked over to Becca and hugged her to him as he had no idea what she would tell him, as Becca said " I need to tell you something important.".

Becca looked at Danny who then asked, " What is it that you need to tell me sweetie?", when Becca sighed then admitted " I'm uh I'm three months pregnant, Danny.".

Danny was shocked when Becca told him that she was pregnant, which lead Danny to place his hand on her growing bump while wrapping his head around the idea of being a father for the first time.

Becca didn't know if Danny was happy about their unborn baby, but Danny then tells her " I'm happy that you are pregnant with our first child." as Becca sighed glad that he wasn't mad with her over the baby.

Later that night, Danny and Becca were in bed talking about their baby when Becca tells Danny " I want our baby to have your surname.".

Danny asked " You sure?" and Becca replied " Of course I'm sure about baby Messer." which made Danny smile with what she refered to their baby as and he couldn't help but wonder how lucky he was with her.

Becca cuddled into Daany who then held her close to him and placed his hand on her baby bump and he smiled knowing that they were gonna become a family with baby Messer. Danny had fallen asleep with images of their baby in his mind...
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PostSubject: Re: First Time (Danny/Becca/Mac )   Fri Aug 24, 2012 8:45 pm

Awwwww,very nice Kaya!!!
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PostSubject: Re: First Time (Danny/Becca/Mac )   Fri Aug 24, 2012 8:46 pm

Thanks and here is the next part...

Chapter Two

Danny thought about his unborn baby and he realised that it would be the making of him, as he watched Becca sleep next to him, he smiled to himself and placed his hand on her growing bump and softly kissed it.

Becca woke up and hour later to find Danny watching her, which gave her the joy that he was happy about their baby together but neither had any idea that their lives could change forever.

Later that week, Becca was leaving her fav coffee shop, when she was grabbed and taken to an old house and attacked, while the call came into NYPD, as Mac explained the case to his CSI's which scared Danny.

Mac asked Danny " You know the victim?" and Danny admitted " Becca is my girlfriend and has been for five years and she's three months pregnant." as Mac nodded.

Nine hours had now passed since Becca was taken and Danny was going outta his mind with worry about Becca and their unborn baby, all he could think to do was pray that they would be found alive and safe.

Becca was scared for herself and her unborn child when, the door opened and footsteps walked in, then gripped her arm hard, then the voice spoke " You are going back to Staten Island." which lead Becca to speak " No!! I'm staying here." which brought a slap to the face.

Danny tried to think who would take Becca like that, when it dawned on him and he went to tell Flack his suspicions about who took Becca, as Flack went to check up on Danny's suspicion only to find that Danny was right and told Mac.

Becca tried to break free from her captors but they stopped her at every turn, only for them to stab her in the chest and then left her for dead, lying on the floor bleeding out.

Flack got a phone call from someone about a stabbing when Flack informs Mac of the news. Danny sat in the locker room crying with worry about Becca and their baby.

Mac and Flack arrive at the location, only for Flack to speak " It's Becca." as Mac agreed and called for paramedics to hurry to their location, within a few minutes paramedics arrived and quickly stablized Becca then took her straight to Angel Of Mercy hospital.

Flack then called Danny and told him that they had found Becca and to head over to Angel Of Mercy hospital, which Danny did and found Mac waiting for him.

Danny asked Mac " What is Becca's status?" and Mac replied " Becca was stabbed in the chest and lost a lot of blood but the doctor's don't know if she will ever wake up.".

Mac then said " The baby is safe." which comes as some sort of relief to Danny about the baby and Danny went to see Becca in ICU, when he entered her room, Danny cried upon seeing Becca in her current status and he just held her hand tightly and said " Please sweetheart pull through for me and our baby.".

Becca hadn't woken up and despite the doctor's telling Danny that she might never wake up, but Danny wasn't gonna lose Becca that easily and he vowed that she would wake up and prove them wrong.

Danny was pissed off with her parents for doing this to her and it made Danny want to protect her and their baby even more and he had no idea what all they did to her while they had her captive.

All Danny could do was wait for Becca to wake up and tell him what happened to her, as he watched her closely while keeping his hand on her bump as he sniffled softly while he held her hand with his left hand just willing her to survive.

An hour or so later, alarms went off in Becca's room and Danny was taken out of her room but he tried to get back inside but the doctor stopped him..
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PostSubject: Re: First Time (Danny/Becca/Mac )   Tue Sep 18, 2012 9:44 am

Love it! You a great writer!!
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PostSubject: Re: First Time (Danny/Becca/Mac )   Thu Sep 20, 2012 2:44 am

Thank you and I have this fic on Fanfiction.net too as the sequel is up too but will add the other chapters to this one and add my other one of Tim Speedle.
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PostSubject: Re: First Time (Danny/Becca/Mac )   Thu Sep 20, 2012 2:46 am

Chapter Three

Danny watched over Becca, just willing her to wake up as he noticed her hand twitch and he hoped that she'd open her eyes and tell him what happened to her, but he couldn't cope without her.

Danny stayed overnight with Becca and he never left her side, he thought over the words that she had told him and he gently grazed her cheek with his knuckles softly as his tears rolled down his cheeks.

A few hours later, Danny had closed his eyes to try and rest but his thoughts were of Becca who had slowly opened her eyes only to find herself scared and she saw Danny there and spoke " Danny?".

Danny looked up to find Becca awake as Danny leant into give her a kiss which she responded to, as the doctor arrived to find Becca awake which surprised him as he checked Becca over and found that her injury would heal up fine.

Becca was now sitting up as Danny sat up beside her, as he still held her hand when Becca asked " Is our baby ok?", when Danny replied " Baby Messer is perfectly fine." which made Becca sigh in relief that their baby was fine.

As Becca thought what her parents put her through, she knew that she would have to tell Danny, but she just wasn't ready to tell him just yet and she would when she felt ready to tell him.

Danny asked " You ready to tell me what happened?" when Becca replied " No I'm not ready to tell you but I will when I'm ready to.", when Danny said " I understand sweetheart".

Becca kept her left hand on her bump and she felt so glad that their unborn child was still alive after what happened to her at the hands of her parents, who almost killed their daughter.

Flack had arrested Becca's parents for kidnap and attempted murder and Flack was pissed off with them for what they did to Becca, their own flesh and blood as Kara told Flack that Becca deserved to die.

Becca sighed to herself while dreading how she would tell Danny what happened to her, as Danny watched her and held her right hand then asked " Marry me Becca?".

Danny had asked Becca to marry him and he wondered if she would agree to be his wife, when Becca replied " I'd love to marry you Danny Messer." which gave Danny such a happy smile and he kissed Becca in joy.

Becca was surprised that Danny had asked her to marry him and she knew that she would be protected by him and also their baby too, which gave Becca a chance to know what love meant for her with Danny.

Danny knew that he had made the right choice in asking Becca to marry him as Danny knew that Becca meant everything to him and she always would, no matter what.
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PostSubject: Re: First Time (Danny/Becca/Mac )   Thu Sep 20, 2012 10:53 am

Great! I will have to check it out.
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PostSubject: Re: First Time (Danny/Becca/Mac )   Thu Sep 20, 2012 2:02 pm

Yeah you will.

Chapter Four

Becca had to spend the next few days in hospital when Mac arrived to visit her and Mac asked " How you feeling?", when Becca replied " I'm feeling ok I guess." as Mac nodded glad that she was ok.

Danny watched as Becca told Mac what happened to her and as Danny watched, he felt a pang of guilt for not being with her that day she was taken by her parents and attacked.

Mac told Becca that she would be safe as the whole team would be there for protection, Becca thanked Mac with a hug which Mac returned gladly.

Danny entered Becca's room only for Becca to tell him " I think our baby just kicked.", as Danny walked over, then placed his hand on her bump and felt a kick then said " Our baby is kicking."

Becca smiled knowing that she had managed to protect their baby from danger as Becca knew that she did the right thing as her hand rested on her bump, when Danny placed his hand on top of her's.

Danny took her left hand and placed an engagement ring on her finger which surprised Becca who loved the ring and kissed Danny lovingly as he returned the kiss.

Few days later, Becca left hospital with Danny who had taken time off to look after her, as Becca knew that she was lucky to have Danny in her life and she knew that she would always love him.

Becca sat on the sofa with Danny who gently cuddled her in his arms as he felt lucky that she survived her ordeal and was still with him, as Danny kept a hand on Becca's bump and rubbed it lovingly.

Danny loved Becca and he knew that once she felt better, then they would decide when to tie the knot and Becca tells Danny " When we get married I'm taking your last name." which made Danny kiss her in happiness.

Becca knew that being with Danny has made her realise just how lucky she is and she knew that they are meant to be together and as Becca leant against Danny's chest, she felt safe and loved.

Later that evening, Danny and Becca were in bed just holding each other close but Danny was gentle with Becca after what happened to her and interlocked her hand with Danny's and smiled feeling so lucky.
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