Unleash your imagination!

Play your own (made) character
 
HomeHome  CalendarCalendar  GalleryGallery  FAQFAQ  SearchSearch  MemberlistMemberlist  UsergroupsUsergroups  RegisterRegister  Log inLog in  

Share | 
 

 Goodbye Aiden [Mac]

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
Go to page : Previous  1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6  Next
AuthorMessage
Det. Stella Bonasera
Admin


Posts : 6857
Join date : 2009-12-03
Location : New Orleans

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Thu Apr 28, 2011 10:10 am

After analyzing all the pictures and things Aiden had in her apartment both Don and I decided to pay DJ pratt a little visit. Of course he had something to do with it, but how do we prove it? we have no evidence that indicates he was at the crime scene. Danny and Adam were working on the car and the evidence on and in there. Let's hope It'll give us a hit that leads to our beloved DJ.. For now Don and I are going to see him.

_________________



► “"Excellence is not a skill.
It is an attitude."” (:



Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.youtube.com/user/IceQueenHesTer
Det. Mac Taylor



Everything is connected.
Posts : 7303
Join date : 2009-12-02
Age : 61
Location : New York

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Thu Apr 28, 2011 4:49 pm

Wherever DJ was going he had a shaddow: me. Of course I hid perfectly so he wouldn't notice. There gotta be something that links him to the murders.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Det. Stella Bonasera
Admin


Posts : 6857
Join date : 2009-12-03
Location : New Orleans

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Thu Apr 28, 2011 6:27 pm

Don and I drove to the place where we could probably find him. An old, not in use anymore building. "nice home" I whisper to Don as we slowly walked into the building

_________________



► “"Excellence is not a skill.
It is an attitude."” (:



Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.youtube.com/user/IceQueenHesTer
Det. Mac Taylor



Everything is connected.
Posts : 7303
Join date : 2009-12-02
Age : 61
Location : New York

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Thu Apr 28, 2011 6:40 pm

What they both didn't know was that DJ Pratt was already on the move, working as a painter he just entered his next place of 'work'. I couldn't enter the building so I waited in the borrowed Avalanche in a little distance to the building.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Det. Stella Bonasera
Admin


Posts : 6857
Join date : 2009-12-03
Location : New Orleans

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Thu Apr 28, 2011 9:18 pm

The building was clear.. damn we needed to find this guy. If Mac was here he probably knew what to do. now Let's hope Danny and Adam will find something while Flack is going to check DJ's credit cards.

_________________



► “"Excellence is not a skill.
It is an attitude."” (:



Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.youtube.com/user/IceQueenHesTer
Det. Mac Taylor



Everything is connected.
Posts : 7303
Join date : 2009-12-02
Age : 61
Location : New York

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Thu Apr 28, 2011 9:58 pm

In the meantime I got a little bored while I was waiting for whatever that bastard would do, but I knew I had to be patient.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Det. Stella Bonasera
Admin


Posts : 6857
Join date : 2009-12-03
Location : New Orleans

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Sun May 01, 2011 9:39 pm

I lazily grabbed my phone normally when I got bored of waiting I would just randomly call Mac to bug him but now he had a day off it was different, I couldn't just call him on his day off right. I lay my phone back on my desk and frown.

_________________



► “"Excellence is not a skill.
It is an attitude."” (:



Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.youtube.com/user/IceQueenHesTer
Det. Mac Taylor



Everything is connected.
Posts : 7303
Join date : 2009-12-02
Age : 61
Location : New York

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Sun May 01, 2011 9:42 pm

I finally see DJ following a woman out of the building and get out of the car, following them on a small distance while I sent a text message to Stella, telling her I just saw DJ going after a woman and where that was.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Det. Stella Bonasera
Admin


Posts : 6857
Join date : 2009-12-03
Location : New Orleans

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Sun May 01, 2011 9:48 pm

My phone starts to buzz, I quickly grab it and read the text. "On his day off he's still working... meet Mac Taylor" I smile a little and quickly rush over to Flack who was about to step into the elevator.

_________________



► “"Excellence is not a skill.
It is an attitude."” (:



Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.youtube.com/user/IceQueenHesTer
Det. Mac Taylor



Everything is connected.
Posts : 7303
Join date : 2009-12-02
Age : 61
Location : New York

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Sun May 01, 2011 10:05 pm

I was following DJ and that woman, careful not to be detected.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Det. Stella Bonasera
Admin


Posts : 6857
Join date : 2009-12-03
Location : New Orleans

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Sun May 01, 2011 11:13 pm

Soon Don and I were at the place Mac had send thru a text, but unfortunately Mac wasn't there. we started to look around hoping we would find him

_________________



► “"Excellence is not a skill.
It is an attitude."” (:



Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.youtube.com/user/IceQueenHesTer
Det. Mac Taylor



Everything is connected.
Posts : 7303
Join date : 2009-12-02
Age : 61
Location : New York

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Mon May 02, 2011 8:24 am

Meanwhile the woman got to her car just around the building and I sent Stella another text as to where we were. Right now it looked harmless, but it wasn't going to stay that way.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Det. Stella Bonasera
Admin


Posts : 6857
Join date : 2009-12-03
Location : New Orleans

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Wed May 04, 2011 7:49 pm

I got another text from Mac and both Flack and I rushed to the place Mac said he was

_________________



► “"Excellence is not a skill.
It is an attitude."” (:



Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.youtube.com/user/IceQueenHesTer
Det. Mac Taylor



Everything is connected.
Posts : 7303
Join date : 2009-12-02
Age : 61
Location : New York

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Wed May 04, 2011 7:56 pm

And I still was at my place, hiding behind a small wall, watching DJ Pratt seemingly talking to the woman.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Det. Stella Bonasera
Admin


Posts : 6857
Join date : 2009-12-03
Location : New Orleans

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Wed May 04, 2011 9:10 pm

we slowly got out our car again and looked around.

_________________



► “"Excellence is not a skill.
It is an attitude."” (:



Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.youtube.com/user/IceQueenHesTer
Det. Mac Taylor



Everything is connected.
Posts : 7303
Join date : 2009-12-02
Age : 61
Location : New York

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Wed May 04, 2011 9:12 pm

I saw them and carefully made myself known to them, so they knew where I was.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Det. Stella Bonasera
Admin


Posts : 6857
Join date : 2009-12-03
Location : New Orleans

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Wed May 04, 2011 9:24 pm

We finally found Mac and slowly walked to him "What are you doing here?" I dare to ask while I whisper

_________________



► “"Excellence is not a skill.
It is an attitude."” (:



Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.youtube.com/user/IceQueenHesTer
Det. Mac Taylor



Everything is connected.
Posts : 7303
Join date : 2009-12-02
Age : 61
Location : New York

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Wed May 04, 2011 9:29 pm

"Getting something to lock his dirty ass up." I replied quietly, as I keep watching him. He was just touching the woman, who obviously didn't like it.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Det. Stella Bonasera
Admin


Posts : 6857
Join date : 2009-12-03
Location : New Orleans

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Fri May 06, 2011 8:40 pm

"It's your day off, you shouldn't be here" I frown and look at DJ

_________________



► “"Excellence is not a skill.
It is an attitude."” (:



Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.youtube.com/user/IceQueenHesTer
Det. Mac Taylor



Everything is connected.
Posts : 7303
Join date : 2009-12-02
Age : 61
Location : New York

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Fri May 06, 2011 8:45 pm

I looked at Stela with a small smirk.
"Since when do I seriously take days off?" I counter.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Det. Stella Bonasera
Admin


Posts : 6857
Join date : 2009-12-03
Location : New Orleans

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Sat May 14, 2011 9:09 pm

"I think once we have this one in jail I'm going to kick your ass" I smile for a second than look back at DJ

_________________



► “"Excellence is not a skill.
It is an attitude."” (:



Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.youtube.com/user/IceQueenHesTer
Det. Mac Taylor



Everything is connected.
Posts : 7303
Join date : 2009-12-02
Age : 61
Location : New York

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Sat May 14, 2011 9:11 pm

"Go on, I guess I deserved it." I replied and then almost jumped when the woman that DJ was talking screamed.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Det. Stella Bonasera
Admin


Posts : 6857
Join date : 2009-12-03
Location : New Orleans

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Sat May 14, 2011 9:15 pm

I focus on the woman, there was nothing we could do yet.. that feels so frustrating.

_________________



► “"Excellence is not a skill.
It is an attitude."” (:



Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.youtube.com/user/IceQueenHesTer
Det. Mac Taylor



Everything is connected.
Posts : 7303
Join date : 2009-12-02
Age : 61
Location : New York

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Sat May 14, 2011 9:20 pm

And then DJ grabbed her arm and tried to pull the woman away. The woman screamed even louder. I got my gun out but knew I had to stay where I was as I officially wasn't working today.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Det. Stella Bonasera
Admin


Posts : 6857
Join date : 2009-12-03
Location : New Orleans

PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Sat May 14, 2011 9:23 pm

Mac could easily help us right now and I know he would, if Sinclair would make a problem about it. I would just say I called him to come and help us. We really need all the help we can get, I was just waiting for Mac to give us a sign

_________________



► “"Excellence is not a skill.
It is an attitude."” (:



Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.youtube.com/user/IceQueenHesTer
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: Goodbye Aiden [Mac]   Today at 3:26 pm

Back to top Go down
 
Goodbye Aiden [Mac]
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 3 of 6Go to page : Previous  1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6  Next
 Similar topics
-
» Not so much a goodbye
» LYND, Morgan Aiden
» Goodbye does not always have to last forever
» Aiden Burke
» Goodbye, Donatello?!? :(

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Unleash your imagination! :: CSI lab and NYPD :: Balistic analysis-
Jump to: