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Eleni Bonasera




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PostSubject: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 6:44 pm

"This is so not fair, Mom isn't giving me anymore money to go shopping with Lydia" Eleni drops herself on the couch. "I understand she has bills to pay and that she's has to pay everything on her own and that's it tough with a child but man........... I really need a new pair of jeans"
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 8:03 pm

I look at Eleni and sit down beside her, placing my hand on her shoulder. I'm not really sure what to say now.
"So... what are you going to do about it?"
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 8:16 pm

"I'm going to let mom move in with you so instead of paying the rent she can pay my cloths" Eleni jokes and gets up to grab the tv remote.

"Or I'll just stay here and watch tv"
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Det. Mac Taylor

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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 8:21 pm

"Oh... I know exactly how much women like to go shopping. I think you won't be happy about staying here, will you?"
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 8:34 pm

"I already got a room here and we are staying here so often that I don't care anymore and I don't believe you are just her best friend" I give Mac a look and frown
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 8:36 pm

"Why the frown?" I asked a bit curious.
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 8:53 pm

"I saw your baby photo's, I look like you, are you my dad?" I glare at you and lay the tv remote down
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 8:59 pm

I look at Eleni in shock. How did she know? And what the hell do I tell her now?
"I have the feeling that it's going to end up in trouble..." I whisper.
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 9:09 pm

"What did you say UNCLE Mac?" Eleni frowns like Mac always does
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 9:19 pm

"I said stop frowning." I lied, knowing I won't get out of it.
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 9:30 pm

"you recognize youself in it don't you?" Eleni frowns even more. she wants to know!
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 9:32 pm

"What if I told you? Will you promise not to run, but listen and try to understand?" I ask in a weak tone. She sounded upset, but she was right, I knew I had just the same frown and she would find out anyways.
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 9:38 pm

"is that a yes? DAD?" Eleni says with a frown. "I won't run. just stay at Lydia's"
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 9:43 pm

"I'd say leaving and stay at Lydia's counts under running, Eleni." I say in a serious tone.
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 9:47 pm

"O right now you dare to say you're my dad you try to boss me around too?" Eleni frowns and gets up from the couch to leave
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 9:54 pm

I gently grab her arm and stop her from leaving.
"You wanted to know, so yes, you're my daughter. But I won't let you leave just like that, not knowing if your mad at us, but knowing you don't know the story behind it." I say firmly as I let go of her arm.
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 9:59 pm

"How can you not tell me you're my father?" Eleni frowns again "yes i'm mad"
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 10:06 pm

"I know you are, so am I. Don't think I didn't regret my choice, but it wasn't mine alone." I tell her in a calm tone, hoping she'd stay and try to understand.
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 10:12 pm

"Why? Why did you not stay with mom and why did you never tell me?" Eleni asks and frowns
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 10:17 pm

"First of all, we were scared, and the second thing is that if anybody found out it could have cost both our jobs and we both needed it." I said calmly. "But that doesn't mean I don't care about you. And I do regret not telling you."
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 10:21 pm

"you two are so stupid! YOUR JOB? you care more about your job than me, that's very good to know" Eleni frowns and walks to the door
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 10:24 pm

I open the door and see an angry Eleni walking up to me "Eleni? what's wrong? Mac?"
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 10:25 pm

"That's not true, Eleni!" I said, slightly getting upset and follow her and stop when I see Stella. Oh my...
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 10:37 pm

"Mom........Thank you so much for not telling my dad was right in front of me" Eleni says angry
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PostSubject: Re: Not fair [Mac]   Not fair [Mac] EmptySat Jan 22, 2011 10:42 pm

I look at Stella with a sad and yet slightly disappointed expression. I really didn't know what to say anymore.
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