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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Wed Feb 16, 2011 7:54 pm

I quietly started my search down here trying to find my partner in crime, without startling him.
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Wed Feb 16, 2011 8:41 pm

Thomas soon got to the back of the room were he thought he heard the cry, but found nothing, Thomas sighed, then holstered his gun, "Nothing" he said to himself
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Wed Feb 16, 2011 8:48 pm

Meanwhile I was still in making my way over to where I heard his voice coming from, my gun ready, flashlight on for extra light. I was surprised to see a basement in this building but something just seemed odd about this place. It was empty and yet I had a feeling someone was here, someone besides Thomas and me.
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Wed Feb 16, 2011 8:54 pm

Thomas looked over and saw Mac, "Theres no one here" he called out to him
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Wed Feb 16, 2011 8:56 pm

"No one we can see." I said to him. "Call me crazy but I feel like we're not alone in here."
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:01 pm

Thomas let Mac's words sink in for a moment, then looked around again, "You hear that?" he asked
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:02 pm

I listened carefully and then nodded my head, yes.
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:05 pm

Thomas turned and walked to were the sound came from, his gun ready
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:08 pm

I followed him, gun ready as well.
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:11 pm

"Other closet" Thomas said to himself as he got closer to it, when he was close enough, he put his gloved hand on the doorknob and pulled it open
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:15 pm

"As much as I don't like it... 'boom'." I said as he detected the source of the noise.
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:32 pm

Thomas lowered his gun, it was Jessica Ackerman, Thomas helped her out of the closet and to the EMTs who were still outside
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Thu Feb 17, 2011 4:33 pm

And again another place to look for traces, so I followed him out and got my kit before walking down again. I hated this already. The one question was, why did they leave two girls behind?
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Thu Feb 17, 2011 8:56 pm

after the EMTs left with Jessica, Thomas walked back inside to help Mac, "This is getting weirder" he said out loud
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:21 pm

"I agree." I said quietly, again having found nothing on or inside the closet.
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:58 pm

Thomas nodded a bit, meanwhile, the remaining girls were moved to a warehouse near Elias Island, along with ten more victims
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Thu Feb 17, 2011 10:01 pm

"I still wonder why they were left. I don't believe it was coincidence or they just forgot." I say while I close my kit and look around once more.
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Thu Feb 17, 2011 10:03 pm

Thomas nodded, "Looks like we will have to ask Jessica and Sandra." he said to Mac
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Thu Feb 17, 2011 10:05 pm

"Hopefully they know something." I said and grabbed my kit.
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Thu Feb 17, 2011 10:09 pm

"Aye" Thomas replied, he then turned and walked to the door
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Thu Feb 17, 2011 10:10 pm

I looked around one last time and then got out as well, heading to the crime lab and get the evidence processed.
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Thu Feb 17, 2011 10:25 pm

Thomas got back to the SUV and placed his kit in the back
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Sat Feb 19, 2011 10:43 pm

Meanwhile I was in the lab, waiting for Thomas and Mac to return and help them analyzing the evidence. I had heard about the case and was eager to do anything to help them. I was also thinking about maybe going undercover for them, as I fittet their target group but I was sure Thomas and Mac would kick my ass if I only mentioned it, yet I had to try.
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Sun Feb 20, 2011 4:06 am

Thomas soon got back to the crime lab, getting what little he had up stairs so Haylen could process it
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PostSubject: Re: crime rings (anyone)   Sun Feb 20, 2011 1:34 pm

And with Thomas Mac got in, too and soon I was busily processing evidence. They hadn't found much on the scene, but at least they had something. The dusty footprint Mac found belonged to men's boot size 11.5. I was now comparing the handwriting on the note they found with the note from the other Crime Scene.
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