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 Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)

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Haylen Becall



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PostSubject: Re: Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Tue Sep 07, 2010 4:47 pm

"Well, right... I'm going to check the knife for DNA then, maybe I can prove my theory... if not, well, than it might be as you say." I answered and again got busy with the knife.
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PostSubject: Re Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Tue Sep 07, 2010 5:17 pm

Thomas nodded, then set the file down and began to process the rest of the evidence that they had collected
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PostSubject: Re: Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:37 pm

"Alright..." I started as I looked at the results of my last piece of evidence. "I found 3 different DNA files on the knife... 2 are definitely male, one of them belongs to James Daley the other one is unknown. I checked all available Databases, he's not in the system. The female profile belongs to Lisa Daley. I guess this proves my theory that Lisa might have gotten the knife and tried to defend herself..."
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PostSubject: Re Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:32 pm

Thomas looked up when Haylen said that, then nodded, "So, our mystery lad attacks James and kills him, Lisa fights back, manages to grab the knife from the attacker, but is over powered." he theorized out loud


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PostSubject: Re: Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:39 pm

"That's what I think, yes. And from what I saw on those crime scene photos Lisa must have fight hard... So... either the killer must be very strong or he's a trained fighter. Maybe a soldier... The knife looks similar to those they use in the Marines..."
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PostSubject: Re Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:43 pm

"Agreed" Thomas replied, being a solder himself, he knew that much of the hand to hand combat training centered on ending a fight quickly, he looked back at the crime scene photos he had on the screen, then back at Haylen, "This may sound odd, but it makes sense that James was attacked first."
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PostSubject: Re: Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Sun Oct 03, 2010 1:24 am

I thought about what Thomas said, about James being attacked first and to me it made sense, too.
"Doesn't sound odd to me. If I was the attacker I would've attacked James first, too. " I said, imagining the scene in my mind. "I mean... James was male, well built and anyways much stronger than Lisa, so I would have killed the person who was more dangerous for me and in any way that would have been James."
I looked back at the notes I made while I investigated the knife and nodded. The result was satisfying. DNA proved our thoughts.
"DNA amalysis actually prooves that. Lisa's blood was much... fresher, so to say and was the first one I got of the knife, while James' DNA was a bit older and more dried." I told Thomas with a determined nod.
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PostSubject: Re Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:37 am

Thomas nodded in reply, "Now that we have determined time of death, we need to figure out why." he replied as he looked at Haylen, "I have the feeling that this was no random act." he added, he looked back at the photos and his notes, then back at Haylen


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PostSubject: Re: Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:44 am

I thought about what Thomas said. No random act... it made sense, but if it wasn't a random act, then what was the killers motive?
"If it wasn't a random act, what was the killer's motive? Maybe he's chasing a specific type of people? Like Look-Alikes or something like that?" I asked, wanting to know what he thought. Maybe Thomas had another idea in mind.
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PostSubject: Re Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Sun Oct 03, 2010 8:24 pm

Thomas listened to Haylen, then looked back at the photos from the "Wedding bandit" case and the ones from the crime scene, it was then he noticed a connection, "He's back" he said out loud in a grave tone, holding up the photos so that Haylen could see what he ment
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PostSubject: Re: Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Sun Oct 03, 2010 10:58 pm

I looked at the photos Thomas held up. He was right, the "Wedding Bandit" was back. Those couples had similarities.

"Let's find this guy..." I said with a determined tone and slightly upset.
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PostSubject: Re Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Sun Oct 03, 2010 10:59 pm

Thomas nodded, then got to work finding anything that would help them find out who this man was, he was not going to let him get away again
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PostSubject: Re: Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:05 pm

"Let's see what we already have... a partial print from an older crime, DNA from the hair Sid found under Lisa's nails, and DNA from the blood on the knife... DNA from the hair matches the second male DNA on the knife, so it belongs to our killer. The knife is used in the Marines, so either he's still a Marine or he was one... Still leaves a big number of suspects.... any ideas?" I asked as I got through the evidence again.
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PostSubject: Re Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:09 pm

"Aye it does" Thomas replied, "Have we checked Marine veterans who may have had treatment for post traumatic stress or who have had a failed marriage in their family?" he asked
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PostSubject: Re: Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:12 pm

"Not that I know of. It's gonna be a lot of work and not that easy I guess..." I said thoughtfully.
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PostSubject: Re Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:13 pm

Thomas nodded, "I'll help you lass" he said to her gently, a comforting smile on his face as he gently patted her arm
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PostSubject: Re: Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Wed Oct 06, 2010 2:08 pm

I rewarded him with a happy smile, knowing I won't have to go through all the files alone. Still I knew it could take hours.
"You're a sweatheart, Thomas." I smiled thankfully.
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PostSubject: Re Chasing a ghost    Wed Oct 06, 2010 10:45 pm

Thomas nodded in reply, "I'm just doing my job, Haylen." he replied gently as he walked over to the computer next to her and starting searching
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PostSubject: Re: Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Thu Oct 21, 2010 8:33 pm

I nodded softly and concentrated on my task at hand, but actually I wasn't really sure where this will take us.

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PostSubject: Re Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Thu Oct 21, 2010 8:55 pm

Thomas smiled a bit, then got back to work, looking up marines that had been treated for ptsd in the past few months or had a divorce, he knew it could be a long shot, but it was a risk he was willing to take
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PostSubject: Re: Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Tue Nov 09, 2010 11:43 am

I was going through the files of Marines that had quitted their duty due to private problems or family problems or without any reason. I started looking up those guys who left the year the first murder took place. Honestly I thought my method would work quite well and it did, but I had a lot of people on my list.

"I already found at least 5 Marines who quitted without any reason and all of a sudden... Two of them live in Florida now and another one lives in California... I think those can be scratched from the suspect list... otherwise, I try to eliminate those that are living in New York..." I said as I looked through the files and let out a small sigh. It was going to be a long search...
"Still have a lot of Marines."
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PostSubject: Re Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Tue Nov 09, 2010 6:24 pm

Thomas looked over at Haylen as she spoke to him about the Marines she had come across, then nodded, "Good work lass" he said to her, he then helped her sort through the of the group that she had left
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PostSubject: Re: Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Tue Nov 09, 2010 8:22 pm

I smiled at Thomas' comment.
"Thank you." I said and smiled slightly before going back to work, going through the files again.
One time I looked up from my work and noticed Thomas looking intensly at one file.
"Found somethin'?" I asked him curiously.
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PostSubject: Re Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Tue Nov 09, 2010 8:45 pm

Thomas looked up at Haylen, "I believe I have found our lad." he replied, holding up the printed off file so Haylen could see it
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PostSubject: Re: Chasing a ghost (Haylen Becall and everyone)   Wed Nov 10, 2010 4:29 pm

I took a look at the file Thomas had been looking at and then slowly nodded my head.
"Wow..." I stated slowly. "This guy has it all, huh? Lives in NY, PTSD..."
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