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 On the job [First version] Mac

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PostSubject: On the job [First version] Mac   Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:07 pm

Another day for the Det. Danny Messer. You think ? Not really. In fact, today is not the better day that I live. Yet everything had started. I worked with Mac on a murder. We were both in a squalid apartment, and was found the corpse. Mac has asked me to see if he could find no other clues in other parts. And I did. Once in the hallway of the apartment, before I was a kind of closet that opened, but before I could make this gesture. The doors opened of themselves letting out a suspect who struck me in its tracks.

A little dazed from the blow, I got up anyway and put in pursuit of the suspect. This was done in the subway. Reinforcements arrived and saw that the new victim was a cop. What has Mac asked my weapon and raised in the investigation until there is more evidence that it was not him who had shot the cop. Mac was now called me into his office. It was the end of the day well almost, and I did not know how advanced the investigation. But from what he had seen everybody thought culprit, why the internal affairs arrived in 4th gear on the new crime scene.

So the front office of his supervisor, I wait the permission to enter.
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PostSubject: Re: On the job [First version] Mac   Sun Dec 06, 2009 5:21 pm

Danny was waiting on the front of my office. I saw him throughout the glass. I stood up and opened the door.

-Enter Danny.

I came back to my desk and looked at him. This case was annoying me. I was sure it was not him but evidences... They did not help to argue in favour of Danny. I needed to know exactly what happenned if I wanted to help him. That's why I asked him to come even if he was raised in the investigation.

-Sit down, I have to talk to you about what happened.
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PostSubject: Re: On the job [First version] Mac   Sun Dec 06, 2009 6:04 pm

Mac opens the door and asks me to enter. He did not smile, in fact he has no expression on his face. It's not a good sign for me. So I go in his office. I know he thinks it's me, I am guilty. Everyone thinks, and nobody gives me the chance to believe in me. So I sit on the chair opposite his desk, he asked me to explain now.

You have new elements, new evidence ?
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PostSubject: Re: On the job [First version] Mac   Sun Dec 06, 2009 6:25 pm

-Yes Danny... But that's not really what I was excepting.... But that's only the beginning of the investigation. I am sure we will find something and the guy who made that...

I looked at him wondering what would happen if I didn't find clues which could help him....

-I think that if you told me what happenned exactly it could help us to make a precise reconstrucion..
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PostSubject: Re: On the job [First version] Mac   Sun Dec 06, 2009 6:35 pm

I looked at him and swallowed. Why he thought that I am guilty? I join my hands and made gestures to try to explain how it spent the scene. I remain clear in my explanation, the description of what happened in the subway.

I've already said. The suspect was released from the closet in this apartment and then began to flee into the street to finish his race in the subway, I followed. Two gunshots are heard, I took out my gun. I identified myself. I shot twice in the direction from which it came. Twice! Then two gunshots they were still drawn, and finally, the cop was on shore, and you've arrived
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PostSubject: Re: On the job [First version] Mac   Sun Dec 06, 2009 7:00 pm

I joined my hands and put them in the desk.

-Danny, internal affairs called. They want to ask you questions. Don't go until I have evidences to show you're not guilty...

I looked at the file on my desk.

-Bullets from the shooting are in the lab. I will have results soon and I do all what I can to make internal affairs patient.
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PostSubject: Re: On the job [First version] Mac   Sun Dec 06, 2009 7:20 pm

I looked, I no expression no longer on my face. I do not understand why everyone is convinced that I'm doing something wrong. I am disappointed and worried when in the future, a place in my team. I knew one thing, I had fired twice, twice. At the beginning of the chase that began in the apartment the suspect had injured his head. I did not yet left me to heal. In fact I do not care all that mattered was the outcome. I gave a nod to the first statement of Mac. But the second I could not say it

You do not believe me, right ?
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PostSubject: Re: On the job [First version] Mac   Sun Dec 06, 2009 8:48 pm

I saw Danny and Mac talking in Mac's office and hesitated before i entered the room.

-Sorry for the interruption, Mac, but I have a witness downstairs! He says he knows what had happened![b]
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PostSubject: Re: On the job [First version] Mac   Tue Dec 08, 2009 7:05 pm

I looked at Danny surprised.

-Of course I believe you !

Suddenly Jess entered in my office.

-Okay, we are going to interrogate him !

I turned to Danny.

-Don't go to see internal affairs. I have certainly something to show you're not culprit.
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PostSubject: Re: On the job [First version] Mac   Tue Dec 08, 2009 7:09 pm

I see Jess go. Thin he wanted that. Now all the laboratory is aware. I listen to Mac, while looking away from Jess. I know she thinks I'm guilty too, because everyone thinks. I'm a nod and continued to watch Mac. If I have nothing to reproach myself and which I think why he told me not to go see the internal affairs.
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