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PostSubject: Little Macman saving his angel   Fri Feb 05, 2010 11:42 pm

Mac came up with the title and I like it [hihi]
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slowly I opened my eyes and find myself laying on a mattress in the corner of a little room.. while I try to get up I feel a terrible pain in my left wrist. It must have been broken when I fell on the ground.. I don't remember anything after that.. I guess I hit my head against the ground which explains the headache I've got.

I stand up with my right hand against my head and look around.. damn my head hurts but I have to find Lindsay, where is she? I slowly walk over to the door, When I try to open the door, it fly's open 'BOOM' against my head, luckily I was able to stand on my feet after the door hit me.

one of the two men from the bar came in and pushed me towards the mattress..


"Where is Lindsay?"
I yell at him.. I can't just do nothing! I need to know if she is okay!

"She's probably bleeding to death and it's all your fault!"
he yells back at me..

"My fault? you are the one who did something to her not me!"
OMG is she really bleeding somewhere, where nobody can reach her?

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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:24 am

I am in my office and I try to finish paper work as fast as I can cause I want to go out with my Stell after. I knew she had already finished work and she went out with Linds to a bar. I wanted to join them and after to ask to my sweetheart if she wanted us to go out. I had an idea in mind : I wanted us to go to the bar I played the bass.

I was doing that when my phone rang. It was Danny. He was a bit panicked cause he received a strange call from Lindsay and he worried a lot. I gave him the name of the bar where they were, asking him to call me immediately if there was a problem. I hoped it was nothing, just an error using the phone.

Finally he called me even more panicked cause Lindsay had been hurt and Stella disappeared. When he told me that it was my turn to be really panicked. My beloved Stella... What could have happened ? Danny told me he was going to the hospital with Lindsay but she could not tell him what happened.

I immediately went to my car with my investigation kit and of course my gun. In the bar I looked for everything which could help me to find her. I went then to the street where Lindsay had been shut. I found some sable and I saw I could take a print from a car pneumatic.

I came back to the lab and worked on this. I found three places the sable could come from... Thanks to the print I discovered which one could be the good one. I immediately went to it calling Flack in order to try to have reinforcements as soon as possible. I arrived and went out the car my hand on my holster. I could not wait for Don. I had to save Stella before it was too late.
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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:30 pm

"Enough! be quiet!"
I hear the man saying, which didn't really impress me though.

"Or what? you gonna shoot me?"
oopss I shouldn't have said that since he really got a gun Embarassed
I just can't stand the fact that they might killed Lindsay!


"You just gave me a very good idea!"
that scared me a little but they probably need me for something so they can't shoot me right?

"That wouldn't be so smart you know.."

before I could do anything he pushed me on the mattress and grabbed my throat, I could barely breathe which scared me A LOT, but I try to not let it show...

"Listen B****, If you don't shut up, I'll make you shut up! and trust me you won't like it!"
he squeeze my throat a little more before he let go.

He left the room and I was still trying to get my normal breathe rhythm back..
slowly tears ran down my cheeks.. I want to get out of here... I want my Mac!!
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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Wed Feb 10, 2010 10:21 pm

There was a kind of old building in front of me, a very big one and it seemed to be desert. An ideal place to hide something... Or someone. I worried about Stella. They could have killed her as they had shot Lindsay cause they do not really need her alive. If they do, I really dunno know why.

I approached and tried to see if I could see something throughout the windows but there were too much dirty. I had to enter in without knowing how many guys they were and if Stella was alive.

I opened a door and silently I entered in my gun out of its holster. I heard two men voices. I followed these voices and arrived to a room. I stayed at the door and looked to them. One of them went out the room by an other door. He was alone and I entered my gun pointed on him.

-You are under of arrest I groaned.

He answered nothing so I approached. I was next to him a hand on the handcuffs when he suddenly moved and caught a long knife. Even if I was surprised I managed to evict his attack and I shot. He fall as I had hurt his leg. I attached his hands and then passed the door the other had passed earlier. In the corridor I heard a scream. In immediately recognized Stella's voice. God she was still alive. I run to the next door and opened it. She was lying on the floor unconscious I guessed. I felt anger in my throat and then in all my body and I yelled at him to let her in peace. He pointed his gun on me and I did the same. We looked at each other. I finally began to approach him telling him he had no chances to escape and he had to put his gun down. As i was near he did it but i felt his punch in my stomach. I let my gun fall on the floor under the shock. I had difficulties to breathe. This difficulty disappeared soon but he had time to take my gun away from me with his feet. I felt his hand on my neck and as he groaned something I didn't get I put my own punch in his own face. He shot and I felt a strange pain in my arm, the left one. I get angrier and I took a little knife I always had hidden against my ankle during this kind of intervention. I hurt him by surprise as he should have thought I was out. He yelled and I managed to attached his hands. Then I went to Stella who was still lying. I took her pulse and in a relief saw she was alive. I kissed her in a movement of relief and caressed her forehead. My movements became slower cause I was bleeding and falling unconscious. Finally my eyes closed and I falled just next to her.
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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Wed Feb 10, 2010 10:49 pm

I have no idea how long I have been unconscious, but when I opened my eyes eveything is blury, I blinked a couple of times till I could see clear again. I realized there was someone laying next to me, not just someone, It's Mac! but his eyes are closed! did they took him hostage as well? or did he came to save me and they saw him and kind of.. OMG is he still alive?

I craw closer to him

"Mac please wake up" tears now rolling down my cheeks please let him be alive.. I lay my hand in his neck to check if he's alive, thank god he is, but he's bleeding! I lay my hand on his shoulder and push a little, hoping he wouldn't bleed to dead...

"Please wake up!" I repeat hoping he would hear it.

I look around and see one of the men who held me here laying on the ground... probably dead, or at least I'm hoping he's dead.. I look back at Mac and remember he probably has his phone with him. my hand slowly slides into his pocket to reach his phone. when I've got the phone I immediately dial 911.

after the women told me they had our location and that they would be there soon I lay the phone on the ground and focus on Mac. My hand is still on his shoulder.

"Mac you have to wake up, Don't leave me here alone!" I cry out..
the hand slits into his and I lay my forehead against his.
"Please.." I'm begging him, It's not good if he stays unconscious for god knows how long... he has to wake up!

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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Sat Feb 13, 2010 1:34 pm

I didn't know exactly where I was . I heard noises, I felt cold but I could not even move and everything was so dark. I suddenly recognized her voice. Oh my Gosh, Stella was alive, she was calling me.

I'm here don't worry my angel, I hear you and I am with you.

But I realized there was no words which came out my lips. I could not tell her I was alive, I could not take her hand and press it to comfort her, I could not open my eyes and see her green eyes and show her I am still with her. I was conscious of what was happening around me but I could not do anything to show that. Oh for Christ Sake ! Stella don't think I've left you. That's not true !

I felt that someone or maybe there were more people, caught me and put me in an ambulance I guessed. Stella's voice followed me so I guessed she was still with me. Now I was sure of it cause I felt someone catching my hand. It must have been her. I was still hearing her voice.

-Stella....

I managed to speak and I was happy cause I guessed it would please her cause she was worrying about me. I pressed her hand in a slow movement cause I had not a lot of strength.

-Thanks God you're alive I murmured

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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Sat Feb 13, 2010 2:36 pm

the ambulance came and they put Mac on a stretcher and into the ambulance. I couldn't think about my own pain or anything that has to do with what just happened. The only think I could think about was Mac, He can't die!

while we drive to the hospital he said my name and I felt Mac's hand squeeze mine. I'm so happy that he was able to speak and squeeze my hand. I know Mac won't die of a shot wound in his shoulder, he was a marine, I guess they are used to pain, but he lost blood and I have no idea how much....

"Don't worry about me Mac"

I place my hand on his cheek and gently kiss his lips and pull away. I wasn't sure whether he was breathing through his nose or mouth and I don't want to kill him! my vision was still not fully clear but I didn't care... It's mac that matters right now

"It's going to be alright" I tell him and try to smile

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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Sat Feb 13, 2010 5:01 pm

She kissed me and I felt a warm wave going throughout my all body. She caressed my check and my lips stretched in a kind of smile. I wanted it to be one but I was sure I managed to do it.

-Don't worry about me Stell'. It will be okay.


I try to rose my arm but I immediately felt the pain in my shoulder and I bite my lips. I closed my eyes afraid of Stella reading how much the pain was unbearable.

Finally they took me to the emergency and I went to surgery. Some hours later I was brought in a room. I was not awoke yet. I hoped Stella let doctors look at her to know if she was hurt.
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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Sun Feb 14, 2010 3:34 pm

He said that I shouldn't worry about him.. but how can I not worry about him? Now he's gone into surgery and that doesn't mean he's going to survive! but he's strong!

the doctor told me to go with the nurse for a check up... I guess I had no other choice than go.

after a while I'm sitting in the hallway. I had some bruises from the allay and a light concussion, the nurse had told me to take it easy the next few days. Now I'm waiting for Mac to come out of surgery and wake up.

The nurse had told me it would take some hours before the surgery would be done.. I take a deep breath and sigh.. I've been waiting for almost two hours maybe more.. and I'm worried sick! what if something went wrong and he's dying right now? ohhhh I don't even want to think about it...

Finally a doctor came walking up to me asking if I'm here for Det. Taylor. I answered with; "Yes I am, Is he okay?" He told me that the surgery went well and that he's stable now. He would wake up anytime soon now.

They had brought him to room 5 on the second floor and that I could visit him if I wanted. OF COURSE I want to visit him!

within a minute I stood in front room 5 on the second floor and opened the door. there he was, laying in a bed with his eyes closed. no wonder he just came out of surgery and he had to wake up from the anesthesia.

I sit down on the chair next to the bed he's laying in and grab his hand. I could see him breathing what made me feel much better.

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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:07 pm

I felt her grabbing my hand and I was happy to know she was next to me. I pressed her a bit as I had strength enough to do that.

Finally I managed to slowly open my eyes. At first I didn't see things really good but it came better as time passed.

-Stella... I groaned.

I looked at her and made a little smile to comfort her.

-Everything is okay for you ?

I didn't care about my pain, I first wanted to know if she was okay.
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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:14 pm

He slowly opened his eyes and squeezed my hand. he called my name but I could tell he had pain. no wonder after surgery. even though a smile appears on my face. Nothing was better than seeing him smile, I don't care that it was a little smile, a smile is a smile right.

Now I hear him asking if I'm okay. I'm pretty much feeling okay actually, Okay I do have a very painful headache, some bruises but further I'm fine.

"I'm okay, don't worry about me. what about you? do you have much pain?"

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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:21 pm

I tried to sit on the bed but I had difficulties to use my arm cause of the pain in my shoulder so I didn't really move. I just tried to let her some place if she wanted to sit on the bed next to me.

-I'm better now that I know everything is okay for you.

Actually I hoped she will come with me cause I needed to feel her closer, to stretch my arms around her, to kiss her, to murmur next to her ear I loved her.

-There is no pain if I don't move my arm
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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:30 pm

"You worry too much about me Taylor"

I smile and see him trying to sit up. what is he doing? He's not going out of this bed before he can move his arm without pain. and no I'm not being overprotective, I just don't want him to suffer.

When he stopped moving I understood what he had done, he made place for me to sit down next to him. That is so cute.


"Well than don't move your arm"

I smile again and stand up and sit down next to mac on the hospital bed.

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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:42 pm

I laughed to what she told me. But I did not agree with what she told first : no I didn't worry too much about the woman I loved.

-That's because I love you I murmured while I passed my arm behind her shoulders.

I let the other warm quiet, not moving it as she told me.
I smiled to her and this time it was more frankly.
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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Mon Feb 22, 2010 12:04 am

I feel his arm behind my shoulder and I snuggle closer to his side.

"I love you too my detective"

I rub his cheek with my nose and smile. I love you

"Thanks for saving me Mac"

I really don't want this to happen again, I'm sure it scared the hell out of Lindsay and mac. and not to forget me. I blame myself for all this. If I just had called Mac or Flack or Danny or someone else.. maybe Mac and Lindsay wouldn't have been in the hospital. It's all my fault!

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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:17 pm

-Don't thank me. I could not let you die. It was normal to do that. It was my job and...

I hang my head wondering if I were not going to blush.

-I won't be able to live without you.

I looked at the sheets waiting for her reaction. I didn't look like that but I guessed that in front of the woman I love I am shy.
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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:37 pm

"But you did save me and you have no idea how much times I want to say thank you"

He hang his head, I don't understand there is nothing to be afraid of. It's not that I'm going to laugh about it, I think it's amazing that he can open up to me. he has been such a private man.

I lift his chin up to look into his beautiful blue eyes. I lay my forehead against his.

"Of course you can live without me, only not as easy as with me"

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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Tue Feb 23, 2010 12:15 am

I had a shiver when I felt Stella's forehead against mine. I liked this feeling so much.

-I really think I could not. I... I can't imagine to live without you, to be alone again like when Claire died...

I smiled to her and as she was holding my chin I kissed her.
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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Tue Feb 23, 2010 12:31 am

I know how much Mac loved Claire and she was a great women. I know he will never forget her, But will he ever be able to love me the way he loved Claire? every time he starts about Claire I can't help but think about it and wonder if it's possible.

"You can Mac I'm sure, you are a strong man"

I feel his lips pressing against mine. I smile against his lips, it feels so good to have him close to me.

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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Tue Feb 23, 2010 12:45 am

I looked at her really seriously.

-I'm serious Stell. When Claire died I felt I was going to die too to go with her. It was too much painful. Now I am happy to be alive cause I love you and I will be happy if I can give you my love and happiness but.. If you die, I won't cope with it, I don't want to live the hell I lived when she died.

I looked at her hoping she will understand something my declaration conveyed : if I thought her death would be as painful as Claire's own it signified that I loved her as much as Claire if it was not more.
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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Tue Feb 23, 2010 12:57 am

"Mac listen to me, I understands it will be painful but you have to go on! Even if I die too but you can manage and I want you to promise me that you don't do anything stupid you wouldn't do if I would be still alive okay! Our job is to protect the city and there will always be a risk that we might die"

I don't want to think about loosing him, But there is always a possibility that it happens..

*sigh*

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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Tue Feb 23, 2010 10:45 pm

Again I hang my head knowing she would not like what I was going to reply.

-I know there is a risk but... I don't know if... If I can make this promise.

I caught one of my fingers and nervously stretched on it.

-I... I just don't want to make a promise I'm not sure I would respect...

I was a man of honor and I always respected promises I had made. I just don't want to lie to her. If one day she die, I don't know if I will be able to survive and to go on.
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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Tue Feb 23, 2010 10:51 pm

I'm pretty shocked about his reaction.. why can't he promise me this.. would he really do something bad to himself if something happens to me? is he insane? life goes on, with or without me!

"What you are saying now is that you would consider doing something bad to yourself if I die?"

Tears well up in my eyes, how can he think like that.

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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Tue Feb 23, 2010 11:27 pm

I bite my lip as I saw she was crying. I passed my hand on her cheek to pull away tears.

-Stell' don't cry... I... If you die it won't be painful... There's no word to describe how much I would suffer from loosing you... And loosing my wife twice in my life... Loosing the beloved woman... I won't support it a second time Stella... Can you understand ?

I realized hen I said my wife twice... Yes I wanted to propose her... I loved her more than everything and I wanted to spend the rest of my life with her.
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PostSubject: Re: Little Macman saving his angel   Tue Feb 23, 2010 11:42 pm

Tears now streaming down my cheeks. I couldn't fight them any longer they were just rolling out of my eyes. as much as I wanted to understand what he had just said, I just couldn't. I know it's tough on him but there is always be a little sunlight that you can lead and you just can't give up, not ever!

"Mac please..."

Why did he say loosing my wife twice? I don't know.. I really can't think straight now.

I hug his chest tight. I should be happy that he cared so much for me, but I don't want him to do anything stupid if I die someday...

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